I sat waiting for you,
But you didn't seem to appear.
I was your best friend,
Always present.
I thought you would stay with me
As I had do it since the moment I met you
But I had being a fool in not trusting my conscience
As it was always telling me "she is not good for you"
Now I could understand what it was trying to tell me
"Don't make friends that will forget you"
No more calls, no more talks
You dissapear as my conscience thought
And this will be the last time I mention you
I'am thinking of looking forward,
Leave the past behind
And make new friends I'm going to trust.
You´ve written a very strong poem. Not only is it descriptive, it ends with some kind of resolution or promise that the lyrical I is going to keep. You´ve done a very good job with rhyme as well. Congratulations!
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