The mysterious old house

In the class of l/l writting we had been working with stories. We read many types, also we worked with vocabulary and tenses. For the final task we had to write a story between 200 and 300 words, that have to finish with the sentence "That was the last time she/he ever saw them"

  Family Hudson decided to move to an old house in the countryside in Britain. Robert and Marylin had two beautiful twin daughter: Isabella and Alice. Both were 13 years old.

    The house was in bad conditions, it was about 100 years old. The grandfather of the grandfather of Robert Hudson had constructed it for summers. The family arrived at the house in a horrible stormy day. At night, as the they were tired of cleaning and ordering all the day they went to sleep, without even dine. The girls, shared a grey and black room with a big window where you had a huge view of the countryside. Both of the girls asked their parents if they could paint the room, but Marylin said that it had to be another day. Very huffy, Isabelle and Alice went to sleep. It was about 12 o'clock when suddenly a noise downstairs woke the girls up. They looked at each other, they were confused they didn't know what to think. Alice, stood up quickly, turned the light on, and got back to the bed again. They immediately fell asleep again. At 12:05 o'clock an other noise woke the girls up. This time they stood up and ran into their parents room. They told them the situation, and their parents asumed that a box had fallen down in the kitchen. That night, girls were allowed to sleep with them. In the morning the whole family woke up early and when they went to have breakfast their bird in the jail was dead covered of blood. The family didn't pay attention to it so that evening they decided to burry the bird. Isabelle refused and she decided to stay at the house to investigate how the bird died. It was about 8 o'clock and Isabelle noticed that her family didn't come back. As the hours passed by she started to get afraid and started crying. That was the last time she ever saw them.